I’d been trying to write about Sudan for years, ever since my last visit in 2006.

NOTHING FELT RIGHT. Essays got mired in the historical complexities of the region, the moral complexities of aid work, the embarrassing complexities of my narrative self-centeredness. Fiction felt contrived; I couldn’t betray my actual memories by mutating them to serve the demands of a story.

Then, in the fall of 2009, during my first semester as an MFA student at Brooklyn College, Michael Cunningham (former director of the BC program) very casually mentioned graphic novels in a talk. Bing! Immediately, I thought of the two most powerful images from my time in Sudan: the tiny, delicate butterflies that swarmed the puddles in the road, and the heat lightning that raged over the valley sky on a few very memorable nights. The tension between those two images felt electric.

And why did graphic stories have to be fiction? I’d read Maus and Persepolis, both powerful combinations of cartoons and horror. Once I began laying out panels, my narrative seemed to present itself. I saw how much could be conveyed with so little writing. Finally I could say what I wanted without the words getting in the way.
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Volunteer + Work


 

About The Author

Jenny Williams

Jenny is a writer and book editor living in Marburg, Germany. She earned her BA in English and Creative Writing from UC Berkeley and her MFA in fiction from Brooklyn College. Her award-winning fiction and non-fiction stories have appeared in The Sun Magazine, The Best Women’s Travel Writing, LITnIMAGE, Raving Dove, Prick of the Spindle, and Pology, among others. She was nominated for Best New Poets 2009 and received a 2008-2009 writing fellowship with Teachers & Writers Collaborative.

  • http://ianmack.com ian

    Beautiful. I think the graphic novel form you chose is perfect. Now I want the whole book ;-)

    • http://www.jennydwilliams.com Jenny Williams

      Thanks, Ian! I’ll keep you posted. :)

    • j9

      AMAZING.

  • Sruti

    Wow, this is terrific! Thanks for sharing

  • http://michelleschusterman.com Michelle Schusterman

    This is one of the coolest things I’ve seen in a long time. Thanks so much for sharing, Jenny.

  • Sarah Merry

    Beautiful and thought provoking. Very interesting medium, but works well.

  • David Miller

    this was super instructive and personal. i would love to read more in this form.

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  • Stephanie

    AWESOME post! Where can we see more? =D

  • Another Jenny

    Jenny you seem to have entered the wrong contact email for your account and now I am getting email updates about the comments on this post. Can you please update/correct your email address in this account? Thank you!

    • http://www.jennydwilliams.com Jenny Williams

      Hey Jenny, so sorry about that! I’ll look into it. Thanks for your patience!

    • David Miller

      thanks jenny! and sorry about that. this should be fixed now. let me know if you keep receiving emails.

  • http://monicaprelle.com monica

    incredible, I loved each and every word.

  • http://www.jennydwilliams.com Jenny Williams

    So glad you all are enjoying the piece!

    In case anyone’s curious about the current situation in south Sudan (the referendum happened in January and the south voted overwhelmingly to secede from the north), here’s a recent BBC article: http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/world-africa-13332114

    And more general background: http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/world-africa-12070034

  • http://sleepinginthemountains.blogspot.com Tim Patterson

    Just finished this piece, felt a little awestruck, then went to read the Times and saw this article:

    http://www.nytimes.com/aponline/2011/05/10/world/africa/AP-AF-Southern-Sudan-Violence.html?hp

    80 dead in southern Sudan – filed 13 minutes ago –

    It goes on.

  • http://omnivoroustraveler.wordpress.com Darrin

    Beautifully done! Your layouts and frames convey a great sense of space and reflection. Ever since I read Guy Delisle’s work on Pyongyang, I’ve been looking for more travel writing in graphic form (shall we call it ‘graphic non-fiction’ or are we still stuck with ‘graphic novel’?).

    • http://www.jennydwilliams.com Jenny Williams

      Thanks, Darrin! I’m not familiar with Delisle’s work–sounds fascinating though. And I don’t know about terminology…seems strange to call a fourteen-page story a “novel”…but “graphic non-fiction” doesn’t sound quite right either. “Graphic memoir”? “Narrative art”? I welcome thoughts & suggestions!

      • David Miller

        hear you on the terminology. honestly wasn’t sure what to put. maybe graphic-novella would’ve been a more precise term?

        as usual, the work that i connect with the most is the most difficult to ‘categorize’.

        • http://www.jennydwilliams.com Jenny Williams

          Even “graphic novella” seems to suggest fiction–which I suppose applies here, as it applies to all memoir, since you’re recreating events that are “fact” according to your memory (as much as we want to believe we’re telling an objective truth–no such thing!). But in some ways, “graphic novel” is truer than any other label because of the place it already occupies in our literary culture. It’s a term people understand and recognize. At a certain point, anyway, we put aside our notions of category and just enjoy (or don’t enjoy!) the experience, right? Look what Jennifer Egan (and/or her publishers) did with “A Visit from the Goon Squad”: linked stories that state “novel” right there on the cover, even though it challenges all notions of what a novel is supposed to do. (Guess the Pulitzer committee didn’t mind, though…)

  • http://kharlamovaa.wordpress.com Arina

    Love this. Love it. Love. Love. Love.

  • http://www.adventurejo.com Joel Duncan

    Excellent work – very creative. This is a great way to get people to read and visualize the journey.

  • Jenny d

    Brilliant.

  • Milana

    I agree with everyone else, this was brilliant. I would love to read more in the future!

  • Sara

    What a beautiful story, and what a creative way to tell it! It really resonated with what I know of Africa (I lived in Eastern Africa for 11 years) and with what I know of NGOs and aid.  Thanks for sharing this!

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