4 responses to An Inconvenient Welcome

  1. What a start in a new city!
    Nice piece and good beginning. I also liked the “stars must have finally aligned” and also the Mormon temple/Magic kingdom-comparison :)

  2. I agree with Nick. Nice flow throughout this post. Very nice portrayal of the emotional landscape too.

  3. I think there’s a nice flow through this piece that pulls you on in the story. I like some of the imagery, especially the idea that you are preparing for landing rather than travelling by car. About the opening sentence: I like it, because it divorces your hands from yourself (because your hands are fumbling, not you) and so adds to the impression of exhaustion. Other people might think it seems a little awkward, I suspect (horses for courses, innit!)

  4. A very aptly named title and good reminder of however bad things seem there is people out there who are having much more of a bad time.

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